Time of darkness
raven flies
winds of whirling
gloom conceal.
Captured in
midnight's
howling command
claws reach out
for soul to claim.
Cloying round
circumference echoes
tick tock backgound
takes possession.
Hidden faces
bats of baneful
hypnotic beating
memerise.
No release
with pinprick light
clock strikes midnight
glass slipper shatters.
Author notes
Picture Prompt (50 words
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE~*~ 10 poets by Asfand.
385 points, ended September 21, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow, This is brilliantly written, like always. So many wonderful words I can see why you won a Honorable mention for it.
Sorry I haven't been around as much lately.
Huggles Grandmamma!
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I like it
hey Sinead i really Like this one i hope u will one day dedicate a fantasy poem to me pretty please with suger on top love me
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Oh I love this o.o
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Great Write
I had to read this one twice to confirm that there WASN'T a rhyme scheme. The flow is such that my mind saw rhymes that didn't exist. A very enjoyable read. -
YOU HAVE BEEN HOODWINKED!
You real weaved a web with the telling of this poem. You set the stage with darkness, whirling wind and ravens. Great job, my friend. Love, D. 
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Hoodwink
I like this it is amazing that you got fifty words to work for you like this.Thanks for sharing this much love and best wishes
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Excellent
Very well done. And a terrific use of the 50 words. Congrats on the honorable mention
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wow ~ another wonderful write. Beautiful and dark!
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Beautiful imagery! Went nicely with my morning coffee. Good luck in the contest.
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brilliant write yet again Alicein, fabulous imagery and great wording used, keep that pen handy!!
well done and good luck in the contest!
E.L XX
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