throughout sands of time
love's dream, like a hardened stone
quickly fades away
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A contest entry
- haiku by risewiththesmoke.
300 points, ended September 28, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dust Off Those Old Haiku (Traditional 5-7-5) by Pollycheck.
425 points, ended December 15, 2007, 57 entries
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throughout sands of time
love's dream, like a hardened stone
quickly fades away
Thank you for entering my ku contest. This is a very nice message that you have put out with this haiku. -
Wonderful job on this Haiku.
Great imagery and wonderful wording
Splendid indeed Best of wishes to you.
Tony
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very emotional words, and great use of metaphor in line 2. thanks for entering
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