Hey Suzy, dirty girl,
Saw you on the internet,
Saw you playing
Hard to get…?
All dressed up
You skanky mare,
Playing games
We wouldn’t dare.
Talking dirty,
Acting tough,
Suzy really
Likes it rough…
Too late to say
You didn’t know
About the camera
Slutty ‘ho…
So what you dated
For two years;
Welcome to your
Darkest fears
Coming true,
It’s all round school.
Just you wait
And see how cruel,
A mob can be
And you’ve done wrong,
Righteous hate
Is oh so strong.
Hey Suzy,
You’re a whore,
Tell me where
I can get more,
Hardcore action
You aim to please,
I 'specially liked
You on your knees…
Hey Suzy
Why so sad?
Someone said
They saw your dad
Beat on you
Out on your lawn
Guess he
Didn’t like the porn
That some kid
Kindly posted through
Your mailbox
Labelled “Smutty Su”.
Hey Dean, my man,
You dirty dog,
That’s some entry
On your blog…
I hear you’re solo,
Had a huge fight-
My girl’s friend’s free
On Friday night.
You in?
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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i like the rhyming in this write from you. thank you for sharing your talent with me through this. i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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Different
Yet pretty good it was written in good form and really whats happening so much today . Their is no such thing as a secret anymore
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This was fucking bad ass! Holyshit it was sleazy in a artsy sadistic way. I like this one. One I haven't seen from you.. Cheers!
If Artsy isn't a word I just made it one.
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Kudos for good rhyme. I like the short, staccato style of the lines. The poem has its own energy, and the way it is formatted really works. Somehow it fits with the dehumanizing nature of the subject.
Nice job.
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Wow daisy where did this come from Not reality i hope? a wonderful rhyming piece that was a most enjoyable read Excellent.
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