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Thank you, Mr. Hershey

your kisses melt in my mouth
filling me with molten pleasure
life to too short
not to enjoy this treasure



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  • sunny day
    December 12, 2007

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    Mary, I never saw this one. How could I miss a write on chocolate. LOL I'm a chocoholic. This one didn't melt in my hands for sure and now I need some chocolate to get rid of the cravings I just got from your words that deliciously thanked Mr. Hershey. I remember when Jeff and I went out to Hershey Pennsylvania and visited the plant. It was a sweet treat on the vacation. That was a number of years back. Congratulations on the HM and it's good to see that you wrote again. I will have to stop by and keep my eye open now that I know you sneak some in every once in a while. HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH KKKKKKKKKKKKKKK Mom


  • crimsondew
    September 20, 2007
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    Very beautiful....


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    September 20, 2007

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    Congratulations on your trophy. It is fun to see you writing again. When you reread your poem I know you'll see the typo. You always let your brain move faster than your fingers. Peace, Liz


  • Androgyneric
    September 20, 2007
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    YUM!

    Jeez, this makes me hungry. Very good, short, and to the point. Like bite-size chocolates.


  • Riftkin gold member
    September 20, 2007

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    the feel and rhyme of this is great,
    and the pure pleasure of chocolate
    kisses melting in the mouth is pure heaven.

    Rifktin


  • islekine gold member
    September 20, 2007
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    Yummy.

    Write on. Good luck!
    *PEACE*

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