Pulls off shirt,
slowly sinks teeth into her neck,
pressure growing harder.
Hands gripping her ass,
nails dragging up her back,
then neck,
gripping her hair,
pulling back.
Teeth dragging over collarbone,
kissing and sucking at flesh,
moving up to meet her mouth,
plunging tongue inside,
tasting her.
Hands cupping her breasts,
rolling nipples,
pulling at them.
Teeth and lips dragging down her flesh,
taking her nipples in,
pulling at them with his teeth,
sucking them,
quickly flicking tongue over them.
Fingertips dance down flesh,
removing her pants,
letting them slide down.
Fingers moving downward,
feeling warm wetness.
Pushing up against her,
rubbing her clit,
rolling in fingers and moving in circles.
Slowly sliding down further,
than pushing up inside of her,
stirring and waving inside.
Fingers moving around inside her,
pushing in and pulling out of her,
pumping into her faster and harder.
Mouth moves down stomach and lower.
Lips meeting hers,
tongue pushing in,
flicking over and circling her clit,
sucking at it as fingers continue thrusting inside.
Fingers pulling out,
being licked clean.
Spreading her open for tongue to press deep inside,
swirling around inside,
thumb running over clit.
Tongue coming back out to circle it,
than diving back inside her,
drinking her down and breathing her in.
Hand gripping on ass,
spanking her,
nails digging into flesh.
Fingers pounding inside while tongue licks below.
Hand strikes ass hard,
finger pressed to hole,
pressure without entry.
Tongue moves inside with fingers a bit,
nails digging deeper,
mouth waiting eagerly for the drink of her.
Tongue moves back up to clit,
as fingers move fast,
hard,
and deep,
filling her with as many as fit.
Lips wrap around clit,
tongue does the same,
teeth move oh so lightly over it,
nails reach up and drag hard down flesh.
Looks up at her through fallen hair,
bestial,
predatory look in eyes,
gripping nipples with nails keeping fingers inside,
flicking tongue feverishly over clit,
continuing,
wanting to feel the pleasure shoot through her body.
Pulling fingers out,
licking them clean.
Tongue pushing inside her,
drinking her juices.
Prowling back up her body,
guiding her hands to his pants,
helping her pull them off.
Grinding against her wetness.
Grinding his thick,
rock hard cock into her,
reaching down grabbing it,
rubbing it against her pussy,
teasing her with it,
pushing in just a little,
then pulling back out.
Cock pressing to her.
Sliding slowly in.
Very slowly.
Letting her feel every sensation.
Then starts thrusting slowly,
but pounding hard inside her,
burying it in her completely,
letting her feel it throb and pulse inside.
Pulling her legs up,
wrapping them around his waist,
pounding into her faster.
Leaning down kissing her hard,
then burying teeth into breasts,
pulling nipples with them.
Driving cock deep inside her,
hard and fast,
biting and pulling at her nipples,
nails raking up her legs,
plunging himself completely inside her and moving hips,
moving his cock inside her dripping wet pussy.
Hands reaching around,
gripping her ass,
pulling her onto him as he thrusts into her,
spanking her with his balls.
Cock throbbing more inside of her,
hammering her pussy,
nails digging hard into flesh.
Rolling her over to be above him,
arching back into her,
driving her down onto his cock hard,
letting it go deep inside her,
thrusting up into her drilling her,
driving his cock completely into her,
time and time again,
as his nails move from shoulders down her tits,
then stomach,
then legs.
Bounces her up and down on his cock,
hands moving up back into hair,
pulling down to him as he thrusts,
sinking teeth into flesh as he pulls her hair,
turning her head into his teeth,
almost hard enough to break skin.
Low,
guttural growl coming from his lips,
mouth opens wide,
teeth drive hard into flesh,
biting hard,
feeling the skin break.
Taking blood into mouth,
on lips.
Kissing her,
pushing into her mouth.
Kissing the wound,
then around her neck,
rock hard cock driving deep inside of her,
feeling her quiver a bit.
Pumping himself relentlessly into her,
thrusting hard and fast as possible,
drinking her in,
forcing her down on him harder as he thrusts,
nails moving over all flesh.
Grips hair,
grabs head forces her neck to his mouth,
drinking her in,
driving his cock so deep inside her,
driving her wild.
Putting all energy into driving her over the edge,
taking all of her heat onto him.
Arching back completely up,
making his own body vibrate,
as he pushes his own energy into her,
taking hold of her to pull her over the edge,
fingers grabbing nipples,
pulling hard at them.
Feeling her go over the edge,
pulling her ecstasy into him,
pumping more inside her,
getting closer to the edge himself,
his cock throbbing and pulsing inside her.
Pushing himself to the hilt inside her,
feeling her body and his,
pumping as hard as he can and exploding inside her,
letting her feel his cock throb with ecstasy,
as arms pull her into him,
nails digging into flesh with vice grip.
Hands moving into her hair,
pulling her face to his,
kissing her hard and passionately.
This is my first Erotica, please tell me the truth on what you think.
Comments
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Hot!!!
It was an excellent first attempt at erotica. It was both simple in wording, and highly vivid in description. It gave me a very clear minds-eye view of everything that transpired..and as a guy, I can say you pretty much hit the mentality of a guy right on.
All in all, a good write
-Rich

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WOW
Damn, I want to make women wet like you just did! Can you teach me how? LOL. Have you read some of my erotica?
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A Fine write
I think there is an erotic poem in your list. I would suggest Center Align and see if you can find the rhyming words and then strip away all else. You may have two pieces of erotica: a poem and a story
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I need your name placed in author box.So I can comment on one more of your poems.Look at the rules.Thanks.
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very descripted very good first erotica
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It was good
For your first erotica, it was verry good -
the truth is..
it was a very good first attempt. i liked the layout of it, however the choppy grammar and order of it was a bit distracting for me. it was hot, hell it got me wet. you used a smaller vocabulary so you repeated a lot of words, even in the same sentences. fix a couple things like that, this has the potential to be a perfect erotica!
good to read from you again girly, laterz


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Ummm... Interesting. You know that this isn't really my thing so I don't know what to say. Sorry.
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