If I could, I would give you the moon,
to shine upon you, every single night.
I would send you the sun,
to shine upon you,and keep you warm.
I would send you the stars so bright,
to show you light, and guide your way.
I would send you the oceans'view,
to watch everyday,so you will not be blue.
If I could, I would send you heaven,
so you could see the golden-gates,
so pearly, warm and bright,
to fulfill your life.
If only I could,I would send you,
the highest mountain,
so you could take-advantage,
of the highest peaks,and venues.
I would send you the tallest trees,
with the scent of pine,
just blowing in the breeze,
so your senses could enhance,all of these.
If only I could, do all of these things.
If they were within my reach,
I know they would make you happy,
and give you some inner-peace.
But I can send to you,all of my wishes,
and prayers so precious and deep.
I know that you can catch these,
and capture them all, within your reach..
Please tell me what you think
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Absolutely beautiful! There are no other words to say; I love this!
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Thank You Heavenly Angel''
I am sorry to 'B' so late...I am very happy that you liked my poem...'God Be With You'...Love, Shirley ann shaw-raytown,mo....
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This was very nicely done. My favorite lines were...
"I would send you the tallest trees,
with the scent of pine,
just blowing in the breeze,
so your senses could enhance all of these."
I think these are the most original, most descriptive, and most touching lines in the poem.
Overall, this poem's message is sweet and romantic, and it evokes, in the reader, a sense of being one with the poet. Maximum effect. <3 -
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Thank You Much
As I Ws Looking Through My Messages, I See That There Are Several People That I have Yet To Thank For All Of The Kind, Nice, And Very Touching Comments To Me,On My Poems. I Hope u All Forgive Me'and Know That I Appreciate Each And Every One Of You...Thanks To Everyone, In Case I Missed Anyone...'God Bless You All'....Love, Shirley ann shaw-raytown,mo......
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masterfully done shirley it has that magical feel to it that captures the imagination and the emotion to enrapture the heart a truly amazing write
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AWESOME
THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH... SORRY I'M A LITTL E LATE GETTING AROUND, BUT I HAD BEEN IN THE HOSPITAL FOR SOME SURGERIES, AND I WANT TO BE SURE AND THANK ALL OF YOU...MOST HAPPY, THAT U LIKED IT..'GOD BLESS'..LOVE, SHIRLEY ANN SHAW-RAYTOWN,MO... -
WOW!!!!
THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH, NANNURALUK-ATKA.. SO HAPPY U LIKED IT...'GOD BLESS YOU MUCH'...LOVE, SHIRLEY SHAW, FROM RAYTOWN,MO.
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beauty!
totally love it. its wicked pretty -
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Thank You Much, Cutie Patootie
I Am Very Happy That U Liked My Poem...Peace,Love,& Blessings Of Many To You'...Love, Shirley ann shaw-raytown,mo...
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song of goodwish
Lighthearted happy go lucky song, lovely to lift ones spirit in blues time...Love is a tune here ..
happy weave.
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THANK YOU MUCH;
I AM SO HAPPY THAT YOU LIKED MY POEMS,CAPRICORNPOET..SUCH VERY NICE COMMENTS,INDEED..I'M HAPPY THAT YOU ENJOYED MY WRITES....WL. CHECK INTO SOME MORE OF YOURS TOO, AS SOON AS I GET SOME FREE TIME...THANKS SO MUCH AGAIN...TAKE CARE~~~~~~~~~~'PEACE,BLESSINGS, & LOVE TO YOU, SHIRLEY ANN SHAW-RAYTOWN,MO.......................................
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There is concrete happiness and peace in this writing. A lot of belief in hope of course is present regardless any circumstances. Lots of feel good in the present moment. Delightful imagery in mind hope. Also in restorative faith perhaps. An inner strength my husband provides me with the visible in the unseen of your poetry.
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Thank You So Much,Cherchezlafemme
I really appreciate your very kind, warm, and sincere compliments, on my poem...'God Bless You'...Love, Shirley ann shaw-raytown,mo.................................
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