I sit here again,killing time.
But the music just hits somewhere deep inside.
And these things are making me blind,can't figure why. can't fight just cry.
I remember it was winter and we were so happy.SNAP back to reality.
Remember when we thought too much? Well i still do,but mine are tainted now,by pain.
Yeah i seem fine but all my scars are inside.
I saw your's on your arm,we both hurt,I said we both fucking cry.
I see you all laughing,i will wipe that smile off.
Because you have had enough.Never me,you will realize too late.
What a mystery,what victory? where is the sanity?
There is a lot of anger inside me now.
I will go to the place,no one will follow me.
I will remove my face before returning to sanity.
When you got nothing to lose,things don't matter as much.
Fuck it i have had ENOUGH XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Author notes
BIT personal but i had to put it on. i wrote it listening to KILLING JOKE check em out THANX,J
A contest entry
- Condemned Minds by Acidanthra.
600 points, ended October 29, 2007, 16 entries
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I can obviously relate to this one and all i can say is yes life is fucking hard we should have more support in reaching humanities broad aim. everyday my revelation continues but now it is just disappointing. I feel so ashamed to call myself human sometimes.
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"Yeah i seem fine but all my scars are inside."
"I will go to the place,no one will follow me.
I will remove my face before returning to sanity.
When you got nothing to lose,things don't matter as much.
Fuck it i have had ENOUGH XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX" I can totally relate. I love reading your poems they're so deep. Keep it up!
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great piece enjoy reading it.
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OMG! i love this
it's so great!
and i love how you say i'll take off my face before i return to sanity
ahhh, i just love your work, it so fucking awsome, lol
and yeah i've had enough too!!!
we should have like an anger group, lol so we can be all crazy mad and insane! lol
hey if you ever need someone to talk to, i'm here, i'd love to help you
well if you need someone, like i said i'm available!
cheers, and amazing job!
stephanie
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This poem is amazing. I really like the line:
"What a mystery,what victory? where is the sanity?"
I hope you feel better
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