My body putty to your ministrations and my heart telling me that I never needed more. Your hands play the strings of my soul, a song released in this universe to play for us alone. I want to be your everything.
You wrap me in your warmth and shelter me in your promises. The heat you’ve given me is nothing compared to the warmth I build within my fires. Your breath kissing me as intimately as I wish your lips would, wrapped around little sounds of appreciation for what I have to give. I want to give it all.
The painful thoughts I’ve chosen to bury while in your arms try and interrupt these moments. I refuse to drown in jealousy while I could be drowning in your smell. There isn’t even time to wonder if I should be here with you now, not when your hands meld with my flesh, as if they develop minds and know exactly where I need them most.
In the end, I lay against your chest and listen to your heart. With every beat I feel a tremor of my recent release and with every sigh I taste you on my tongue.
Being pressed up to you, I’m now sure. You were just what I needed most.
Author notes
ummmm.... this is the first time I wrote in this style..
danceswsquirrels
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A contest entry
- && Think of me when you go to sleep. by blemished irises.
1400 points, ended September 26, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
You can say it... but I might fling poo at you.. ::eyes shift left to right::
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Wow this is brilliant, well done my pocket pirate. i love the way in which its written and the wording is awesome, im so jealous i love it all and there are so many lines that just stick out to me...thankyou for a wonderful poem.
a song released in this universe to play for us alone
i love this line, it just grabs your attention, very well done, yo ho ho go pirate.
hehe, i got an awesome poet pirate.
an awesome write.
kelborn
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I love this style; it's smooth and calming...I think almost everyone wants this moment.
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Well this style rocks!
This was beautiful for whatever prose is, I have never written this kind of piece. Is it similar to pic inspiration? Well, either way it was well written and again, great vocabulary in this! grr i'm jealous ::cries:: These lines were my fave "You wrap me in your warmth and shelter me in your promises. The heat you’ve given me is nothing compared to the warmth I build within my fires." I would give you applaud but i have none left :@ damn thing!! -
I like it, prose is fun, you did really well since you weren't real sure what prose is... This is pretty, and sexy, makes me wanna shatter the earth too... lol
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HAAHAA! Thanks!! Yea... I'm not sure still... but I might try a little more on it... get prose down cold! ::makes a strong man gesture::
J~~~
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