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Fading Away

A forgotten soul fading
into the darkness of lies.
Drenched in the blood of
lies.

Feeling the pain nearly breaking
her down
as she lay on the ground.

All her dreams being
turned away from her.
Being told everything that
she does isnt right.

Lost herself because of fear of
criticization.Not knowing why everything
she does is wrong forever
her soul wonders lost and alone.

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