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Endeavors


My heart is up on a shelf
waiting for you to pull it down

The tea is brewing on the stove
waiting for your return

The bubble bath is heated up
for our next adventure

Our favorite CD is loaded
awaiting your entrance for our dance

Their is chocolate strawberries
awaiting for our delight

All I need is you to come home
to enjoy all the endeavors I have planned
for tonight.

I only hope you are in the mood
for this party.

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  • Blooming Poet
    December 13, 2007

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    i love this poem. I like how you used the word endevour so well. my fav line in this poem is

    My heart is up on a shelf
    waiting for you to pull it down


  • Naridill
    December 13, 2007

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    Very intriguing and inviting. This is penned extremely calmly but inviting. A beautiful piece indeed. Thanks for sharing.


  • introubleintx silver member
    September 20, 2007

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    Hope all

    Went well with the party! I love chocolate strawberries by the bed, and kisses after such! YUMMY! Cute write Ms. T!

  • Just4u
    September 20, 2007

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    Sound like one cool intimate party about to happen...

    Hugs...Eddy


    Tech: There are chocolate stawberries


  • Sprite silver member
    September 19, 2007
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    Loved it

    Sweet and delightful. I have done this too and wish he would think something up along these lines. Must it always be the woman? In fact, just this evening, I was wondering the same last line! Joyce

    PS. You are always so sweet to me when you reply to my poetry. Thanks.


  • Shirley Shaw
    September 19, 2007

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    A Very Beautiful Poem

    Very Well-Written, and I Love It!! Lets' Hope Your Intended Comes Home To You (On Time) Now...LOL.....Lovely,Sexy, Romantic Poem....'God Bless You'....Love, Shirley ann shaw-raytown,mo.........

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