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When Dusk brought us to porch swings

Days weaving in and out, summer went in an endless stream,
We'd seek each other's company and form gossamer dreams.
Porch swing cuddling led to talks of the world,
love fell upon us, leaving forever unfurled.
Troubled times, death and sweet tragedy,
Taught us to cry and remember why we breathe.
your hand in mine as we took in all the blows,
We'd swing down the paths we both chose.
worlds at our feet with the happiness it brings,
A time where all we had were front porch swings.


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OPTION THREE= Random Inspiration. (same listing here as lyrics, i guess.)
Porch Swings
by ali34

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  • InMyFlames
    June 30, 2008
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    aww this is so sweet i love it, great job and thanks for entering


  • MadisonRae
    September 23, 2007

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    something so simple and everyday can be so meaningful. this piece expresses that message soo delicately. I enjoyed it =)


  • Trinsa
    September 21, 2007
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    Ok that was awesome. Porch swings=amazing, this poem=amazing.