i struggle to remember the passage of time
and what it's like to feel,
outside this moment.
think straight.
but if existing means this has to end,
then i don't want to be real.
if it means your hands won't touch my skin,
the light will penetrate my eyelids,
the world will spin...
don't stop
i don't want to be real...
Author notes
sry, its not rly prose, but its what came to mind...
In a list
A contest entry
- && Think of me when you go to sleep. by blemished irises.
1400 points, ended September 26, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
wow, this killed.
I love it, really.
-
It is beautiful but very sad. I hope things do get better for you.
Gaylene
-
-
hmm. interesting. it wasn't rly meant to be that sad... i guess people see things in different ways
-
-
it's beautiful ...
not really anything else to say
Seej
Adding your comment:
