Staring out the window, my eyes drift close as
the memories of yesterday begin to flood my mind.
She is but the core of my soul, and i,
stuck in her embrace,
stand in the midst of
her still lingering secrets.
I can still picture her,
lying on the floor,
darkened streams shedding from her body.
I still smell her sweet perfume,
feel our flickering hearts
the first time our lips softly brushed.
I'm still making love to her,
my hand between her thighs,
our bodies forgetting everything but our warmth.
I'm slowly dying, my mind is rotted,
drifting in and out of unconsciousness,
becoming nauceous,
wanting the end.
Until i'm gone,
until age begins to unravel my soul,
i am left without you,
in the shadows of my sighs,
wishing...
dreaming..
waiting.
for a better tomorrow.
A contest entry
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I wrote this in about 15 mins...what do you think??
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Sweet!
This poem has a lovely flow to it, and a very emotional meaning.
Love it!!
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a spelling mistake or two but it had depth and feeling. good job. thanks for the entry!
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That's so sad. Who is it about? jeeeeze, anyways. i love youuuuuuuu.
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not really anyone...just needed to make something for a contest and this is how it ended up...good???
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very good!!
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