She walks through the good and the bad.
Dances on minds and on pins.
Even when you're feeling sad.
She makes you the one that wins
Just the thought is as a mortal sin.
And then, with a smile and a grin.
In a garden, the one and only rose.
This is the only thing that grows.
The World decides to hold the pair.
A parting in the veil.
All each does is watch and sit and stare.
Than risk it all and fail.
There's a disparity tearing things asunder.
It's just a way of making it a blunder.
Never to have been and tried for real.
Though his heart is one that she did steal.
Please tell me what you think
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sweet ^.^
aww. ish soo cute! =] i love it!
your poems are soo much better than mine =]
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Oh my ^^;
*Blush!*
Thankies! <3
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awwww
This poem is so sweet. I absolutely love it. I look foreward to reading more of yours. Keep up the excellent work. This is really really good. I love it.
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Thank you most kindly
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omg that is amazing thats so amazing i love it
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Thank you most kindly! Glad you liked it!!!!
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Gorgeous...
Sheer brilliance....
Great rhyming...
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Thank you most kindly! Can't return the favour right now though, ha ve an impromptu Maths exam in umm 30 mins and I still have to find where I'll be sitting it. Dang
Anyway. Catch ya later!
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Omg, this is so beautiful. I swear it tore my heart out just reading it. I know how this feels. Wish I could say more, but I don't really know what. Good luck?
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Thank you! I feel like that with some things too so that's ok! I guess that the thing behind it all didn't get anywhere and then it was too late. But... so goes
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Thank you! I feel like that with some things too so that's ok! I guess that the thing behind it all didn't get anywhere and then it was too late. But... so goes
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What do you mean it was too late? Did she die? (Kinda blunt sounding. Sorry)
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Oh no. Waited too long and ended up moving away to Uni.
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Aww well maybe someday things will work out. In the meantime, you may want to recheck the last line in your poem. =P Sorry.
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hehe, I saw earlier But had to leave for breakfast before I could do anything about it! Now I have dinosaur face paint on
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Dinosaur face paint? Why do you have dinosaur face paint on?
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Well... I went round the University society fair and was abducted by the Zoo society. They sat me down and said "Right, I'm going to paint your face like a dinosaur" so they did.
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