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Grown Men Shouldn't Act This Way [Lyrics]

 

 



Beautiful girl, you are so young,

I can't help it, but this pain has just begun.

Grown man, I shouldn't act this way,

that's what, your Mummy and Daddy'd say.

Oh baby, please just come play with me,

you can dance while I get all dirty.

Just let me stroke your gorgeous hair,

lets walk outside in the fresh air.

We can play outside in the playground,

just kiss me baby, when no-ones around.

Lets play a game, you must not scream;

remember, we're on the same team.

Let me hold you and press you real close,

girls like you, turn me on the most.

Beautiful girl, you are so young,

I can't help it, but this pain has just begun.

Grown man, I shouldn't act this way,

that's what, your Mummy and Daddy'd say.

Oh baby, please just come play with me,

you can dance while I get all dirty.

Just sit on my lap and tell me your woes,

you can cry to me when I beg for you so.

Don't you love my grown up touch,

oh baby, we adults call this lust.

I can feel that you'll drive me real wild,

who gives a damn if you're still a child.

Young and fresh, have to start one day,

untouched and delicate - I like it that way.


Beautiful girl, you are so young,

I can't help it, but this pain has just begun.

Grown man, I shouldn't act this way,

that's what, your Mummy and Daddy'd say.

Oh baby, please just come play with me,

you can dance while I get all dirty.

Don't tell anyone about what we do,

it's our secret; kept between me and you.

We'll keep this hush hush til you've grown,

it'll become, the only life that you've known.

 

 

Author notes

Not for the faint of heart. Okay, you ask me how I can write like this, I don't really know. No I wasn't touched up as a kid, not that I can ever remember what's happened to me anyway. Been fondled by older guys in teen years, but that's not the point.

Controversial? Yes. But I like controversy at the moment.

Don't bitch at me. I'm anti paedohpilia and child abuse, this is for you to see how these sickos mind truly works.

I REPEAT NOBODY TOO YOUNG OR THOSE WHO ARE EASILY TRIGGERED SHOULD READ THIS!!! I HAVE WARNED YOU.

A & I.

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  • Violent Glass
    January 26

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    wow i thought this was wonderful
    i got the message you were sending
    i thought you wrote it well
    i've been that little girl so i can relate to
    this, and for someone who hasn't been the little girl
    you wrote it really well
    great job
    i really liked it


  • Sir Squigglim
    November 29, 2008

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    well. It's sick, it's twisted, but I've gotta admit it's /very/ well written. And you're right, you did warn us. It's very good!

    And speaking in the voice of the abuser makes it even better. We never see that side of the story, do we? No, never. It's very well done.


  • LovelyTraces
    November 22, 2008

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    i love that instead of capturing the thoughts and feelings of the abused like everyone else does (including myself, i must admit) you go outside the well-trodden box and capture the thoughts and words of the abuser. this is very well-written. definitely worth your reader's time.


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    A powerful poem about how sick some people in society truly are. And I agree with the title, grown men shouldn't act this way.

  • LoveToLaugh07
    March 14, 2008

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    I know that this actually happens and it is sad to know that people actually do this. I'm glad that you are making it known. It was real written, but it's very sad.


  • DeadlyPoetic88
    March 13, 2008

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    This is ineresting. Sad. Its so sad. Children get treated like this more often than anyone would want them to.

    Dani


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    Wow this is so sad, yet very true facts for a lot of young girls. As sad as this maybe, yo have done an wonderful job writing it.
    Good lck in the contest.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours alesyd
    Joyce


  • vampirefreak606
    March 11, 2008

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    breath takin

    wow im random.
    xxx
    but i really like your style.
    so...i dont know...
    really beautiful

    Ttyl.<3


  • Kiss the girl--x
    March 9, 2008

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    This was good. really good.
    It's obvious that you're not pro-pedophiles [=

    This was sad, though && it made me just, remember stuff. It's very very real.

    goody job


    let's try the clappy men lol


  • Polaja Greeters member
    March 7, 2008
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    This is a very interesting set of lyrics... I like how you have captured the mind of these people in such an insightful way... congratulations on the honorable mention, it was well deserved... this is a brilliantly written set of lyrics for all of the controversy of their content

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • never-2-B-loved
    February 2, 2008
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    wow

    this is amazing! i really like how you got into the guy's mind. good job. sehr gut


  • Asylaarix
    January 19, 2008

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    You Did Good

    I love the way your words touch so many people ... There are tons of sick fuckers out there ... and sadly the numbers are only growing ... The flow to these lyrics were nicely done ... you have a talent ... and I love the way your mind works ... it's like you are in the mind of the criminal ... you can sense what they sense ... and you pen it well ... As sad as this piece is ... it's very good ... and beautifully penned ... good job hun ...

    Love Ya
    ♥CC♥


  • Timespell
    January 18, 2008

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    Unfortunately the world is full of "SICK FUCKERS".. Some people are quite prepared to turn of there hearing aids, when it comes to this sort of thing. A public flogging used to be handed out to sexual deviants. But now we hand out a new identity. Is the world fucked up or what??

    Well done on these lyrics you have penned them well.

    All the best,

    ~T.S~




    • xxRainbowDawnxx
      January 18, 2008
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      Definately.
      My other song called I Must Change, should also be in the same place as in focus list.
      Well, that's similar, but about my ex boyfriend. I guess it's about the same kind of topic, though maybe not as graphic.
      Thanks for commenting, really appreciate it


  • volcaniclastic
    January 5, 2008

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    It's good. Makes me profoundly sad - but they are good lyrics nonetheless.

    Don't you love my grown up touch,
    oh baby, we adults call this lust.

    I've nearly killed a person once for what's written in those lines.


  • raggyann
    December 30, 2007
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    ya there are some sick m fers out there
    you did a great job of exposer on this one


  • abuyi
    November 26, 2007

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    Don't tell anyone about what we do,
    it's our secret; kept between me and you.
    We'll keep this hush hush til you've grown,
    it'll become, the only life that you've known. - a very nice way to end this write.

    its sad to say that this happens a lot.. i havent encountered any 1 but if i find 1 iam gona kick his ass so bad that he would be scared of kids

    i really liked your write and i encourage awareness to such incidents.. these minacs all over the place it can be ur next door neighbour or our priest..we should be aware of it and shouldn't live in ignorence that it dosnt happen in our place.. we should teach our children, friends that we are there for their support and we will help and ready to listen.. atleast it will give courage to their little hearts to be open n clear

    thanks for writng such a provoking write
    and congrats for your green

    regards
    abuyi


  • Sean Logue
    November 1, 2007
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    Excellently put.

    It sounds all too familiar, unfortunately.


  • Emm Jayy
    September 26, 2007

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    This is extremely messed up... but it was also very creative. I don't think I've read a poem about child abuse where it was from the point of view of the abuser...

    Great job and good luck in the contest!


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 20, 2007
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    you know i don't know what to think about the subject of this poem but i will say this, this is an amazing poem that you have here, i mean that, i mean as i read it i was watching this all happen in my head, and it read like some scene in a movie of something, i got nothing to bitch about,so keep it flowing

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