Oh Witch Oh Witch
Play your beautiful
Tunes
Play the song for
Happiness
And Holiday joy
You play it best
Why don’t you
Do it now
You’re the best at it
and you know it
Its halloween
Can't scare me
with your tune
You friendly witch help me
be like you
the best Musician in town
Teach me the basics forever
I will be your sub
I won't be the best like you
but I'll try
Beautiful player keep
playing your tune
A contest entry
- 15 and Under ONLY ~ Win A Gold Membership in our Halloween Contest! by Amunet Wolfbane.
6000 points, ended November 14, 2007, 55 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is creative and I can hear the song. I get such a beautiful image from this piece. It flows well and I must say I think you did a great job penning this one. Way to put the effort into it and come out with a beauty! Bravo!
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A witch sings a unique song indeed and they are the best at what they do. Such creative thought has gone into penning this poem and I appreciate that very much. Well Done! Thank you for entering and best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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The though of a musical witch is quite good here actually
I'm trying to imagine how her song would sound though... It probably wouldn't bring much good 
Anyway, I enjoyed reading this poem - thank you for entering the contest, I wish you the best of luck!
Leander -
I think you spelled Halloween wrong. But other then that very nice.
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this is sssoooo gooood!!!i love the way it kinda rolls right off your tounge. good luck in the contest!
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Wow. I really liked this. I think if you put it into stanzas maybe..
I liked it a lot. very nice.
Good luck in the contest!
~Pandy~ -
Commentary
If you were to break the write up in certain areas, the piece would really look good and therefore, grab the reader's attention for this whimiscal write. Keep penning and good luck
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