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abandon.

its hard to hold your head high
when your heart is weighing you down.
unable to make eye contact,
my vision of you is blurred.
forgotten.

your eyes used to be my escape,
from the world and my worries
now nothing but dark, deep holes,
burying your secrets and your soul

i wish i could cut you open.
remove your heart.
(not like you even use it)
and open it. open you.
i wish you would open up.

last night. my heart was singing.
all for you.
it woke me up.
and it doesnt even like to sing.

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  • Kristin Melissa
    September 19, 2007

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    This is wonderful and I know two people that if you combine them... they would fit this perfectly... Koodles
    Blessed be
    Mystic