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Dream, Love, Dream

Dream. Love. Dream
Thats what I want you to do
Please dream of me
And i will dream of you

Your tender hugs
And blissful kisses
No more shrugs
or angry hisses

Hold me now
Hold me close
hate be plowed
Love I chose

Dream. Love. Dream
Of us holding hands
Seam to Seam
real love stands

Jump galaxies with me
as we do in my dreams
Walk across the sea
as you carry my needs

I know you love
I know you care
Dont show me above
Now! do you dare?




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  • charmedrules33
    September 25, 2007
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    i like the
    -Your tender hugs
    And blissful kisses
    No more shrugs
    or angry hisses-
    part.

  • Eusebius
    September 24, 2007
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    bravo

    Very, very, very rooooomantic piece of poetry here.... bravo... bravo... bravo...


  • Patpowers silver member
    September 20, 2007
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    Nice work on this! This is so original and you did a superb job! KEEP IT UP!!