If I could re-write the crevices on your fingers I would imprint them on those nights.
Those cold nights;
You grasp just rite.
We fit like petals.
What is this feeling?
This heart thumping, dazed
Do any thing for you feeling?
The feeling I get when the heat from your hand hits mine.
We are under those nails.
That hold our just happened.
That cut our I don’t knows.
We fit like petals.
Go away morning.
You chase dreams away.
You chase my lovers’ finger tips away.
You expose lies.
You dry us up at high dawn.
We fit like petals.
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TheNewDestiny AKA destiny h.
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A few spelling errors and if you used " ' " around certain things it would make it easier to read like
"That hold our just happened.
That cut our I don’t knows."
Would be easier to read if you had it
"That hold our 'just happened.'
That cut our 'I don’t knows.'"
other than that i really enjoyed this.♥
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