in so many
calamites
i took you
as
little suns
committing
suicide in
my pathway
throwing
yourselves
there in order
to kidnap
my attention
on all
four knees
begging for
me to forgive
you
and I
asked of
what
my memories
of tomorrow
still not
permanent
and my grudges
hardly perfect
compared to
yours
in three
pies you
served them
to me on
forks of
different
tasting value
i picked
key lime
to remember
you as
the snotty
green puddle
and my
little
Miss jack-in-
the-box
Author notes
"Experience is what you get after you needed it."
Yeah, for those people.
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Comments
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ha ha lime green snot! interesting flow!! I am always thinking new ways to *fix* my free verse! this is pretty cool! nicely done, good luck
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