i wish i knew then
what i knew now
i didn't actually love you
even though i thought i did
but it still hurt
to just be left behind
forgotten for someone else
the pain left a scar on my heart
it will always remain
etched into my mind
i know that time heals all
it has healed the wound
left behind by you
A contest entry
- Heartbreak by Rowan.
850 points, ended September 23, 2007, 13 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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*sniffle* that so sad, yet hopeful. let me go cry now in that far off corner over yawnder. very power, words that you have form.
~okami
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he's looser for leaving you go
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It's hard isn't it..
and knowing what i know still doesn't make endings any easier, i just have more words for it now.
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Goooood job... I like it..... Keep up the good work!!! An good luck in the contest!!!
~Asa of the Poets of Incineration
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