shaking and trembling
he can tell i'm nervous
oh god, what am i doing
how did i get into this
yeah i love him
but am i really ready
is it going to hurt
like everyone says it does
will the pain go away
what's going to happen afterward
will he hate me
because i'm not any good
oh god, what happens if i get pregnant
what am i going to do then
i'm officially freaked out right now
oh god, here we go.....
that wasn't so bad after all
A contest entry
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499 points, ended December 28, 2007, 36 entries
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nice...very nice. was this really how it was for you?
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It wasn’t so bad after all? I hope it was better then you thought. Great poem I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
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Beautiful !
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wow. i like it. it was a good piece and you did what i asked. what was on your mind? it was pretty good. i liked it a lot. the last line was kinda funny. good piece! good luck!
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