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Acid Tears

your tears, like acid on my skin
it burns to see you cry
every time i see just one, simple tear
inside, i want to die

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  • Shuberth
    December 29, 2008
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    i loved this and i understand this... nice write and nice rhyme

    Shuberth

  • redderthenroses
    October 4, 2007
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    very powerful...


  • Poet-of-the-shadows
    September 19, 2007
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    again short but beautiful

  • Eots
    September 19, 2007

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    No capitalization anywhere. Good. I hate people who capitalize part but not all. You obviously meant to do that. I love this. Just barely long enough to get away with the title.... Anyways. Good job.

    ~Asa of the Poets of Remaining