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Aflame

the fire in your eyes
the passion in your words
the love in your actions
lights my heart, my soul aflame

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  • redderthenroses
    October 4, 2007
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  • Poet-of-the-shadows
    September 19, 2007
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    Wow short and beautiful !

  • Eots
    September 19, 2007

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    Good job... It has a sort of song quality in it.... really nicely done... Almost great. Keep writing 'em!!!

    ~Asa of the Poets of Erasing