They say that black is an evil color
They say it's for the dead
But I wear it proudly
Their fears are only in their heads
A funeral isn't the only place
To wear this beautiful shade
And saddness wasn't the only thing
For which the color black was made
Author notes
I wrote this in a hurry and I dont think its finished
whatcha think?
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This is good, in the south it seems you wear too much black and they lable you a goth which OF COURSE means you are evil *sarcastci tone*
Love this, a wonderful write!! You wear black as much as you want!!
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Lol, tell them violet said to shove it next time theybug you BLACK IS AWESOME!!!! And you have my explicit permission to knock their lights out!!
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hmmm...this poem is simply bursting with emotional energy!loved the atmosphere!you've got some pretty thoughtful word-combinations in here!well done indeed!keep it up!
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*wear even.
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It's a good write. But it only applies to some cultures I think, in China they were red to funerals. And in Japan a black Fox is good luck.
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I have personally never heard anyone say that the color black is evil... that's honestly a new one to me. I've heard that it makes you look slimming and that most depressed people wear it.. but evil? That's weird. Interesting piece, needs more though... a tad bit too short.
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finished or not its great
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This is such a great write and a wonderful tribute to the colour black. So many people think if you wear black its evil, or its for a funeral like you have said in this poem. Well done, I enjoyed reading this.
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