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Luna, The Witch

 

 

Luna, the witch who lives on the moon,
(for they need witches up there)
grew lonely sleeping in craters...
spending dark nights brushing her hair.

 

So, she decided to whip up a potion,
(yes, that should do the trick)

To create a magic companion.
Now which ingredients to pick?

 

A pinch of lunar moon sand,
(a dash of twinkling star),
a fistful of forgotten dreams

and crumbs from the cookie jar,

 

She stirred the bubbling cauldren.

(excitement on her face)

With a poof and a magic sputter,
a witch popped into space.

 

They were both so very silent,

(for, both were very shy)

But they quickly dashed their fears,

and took to the empty sky.

 

Loneliness, just a memory

(as the good friends got along)

Together, they practiced their magic,

and lived peaceful, happy, long.

 

 

 

 

 



 

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    November 11, 2007

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    Wonderfully unique and very well done. This is very impressive and I surely have enjoyed this very much. Bravo!


  • Celticmoon
    November 10, 2007
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    Oh I like this! I love how you have gotten so creative and placed the witches on the moon. That is just so differnt. Your rhyme was done well and the brackets really added to it I think. Thank you for entering and best of luck to you.

    Blessings
    Bel


  • leander Moderators member
    November 9, 2007

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    This is truly a great piece that you have written here I really love the story that you have told and the lines between brackets are really a nice touch of detail to it

    very well done!


  • HugsForEveryone
    September 26, 2007

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    hmm..
    Witches. I like...
    Hmm. Nicely done, I liked it a lot
    Good luck in the contest!!
    ~Pandy~

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