The fall is here
And the wind is cold
I drop a tear
Cuz you're not here
Falls one leaf so lonely
I try to think of what you told
But can think of one thing only
That i feel so lonely
It's spotting with rain
Comes up feelings old
Can't deny this pain
I stand still soaked by the rain
Clouds darken the sky
And I imagine how me you held
I break down and cry
And the lightning lighten the sky
When will this end
My heart feels so cold
You're only my friend
And that's the sad end
A contest entry
- When Friendship And Love Collide. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended October 1, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Teenage Love Poems (May Be Prewrites) by ChrissyJean.
330 points, ended October 8, 2007, 49 entries
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425 points, ended October 24, 2007, 16 entries
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Thank you poet for your kind and beautiful entry to my contest. I adored this poem, especially these lines:
Falls one leaf so lonely
I try to think of what you told
But can think of one thing only
That i feel so lonely
Thank you again.
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Cute.
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awesome poem!!
but i'm sorry to say i have to remove it, cause you have 2 trophies on your authors page. i wanted people who had no trophies to enter. but thanks!
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I can relate to this very well, and also know it hurts deeply, thank you for pouring your heart out with this, Josephine
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i had goosebumps throughout reading your poem.i imagined i was the person, alone. i 'felt' your loneliness. although probably not as much as you, but this is really good.
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