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Away With A Stranger

Away with the stranger

No blood on the bed

The next time they see you

You'll be photographed dead

With legs and arms shackled

And a gag on your mouth

You stare at your killer

As your life is breathed out

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Away In A manger.....Dmonik Style

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  • Candyknife gold member
    November 12

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    lol

    never even heard this before so i dont know what youre talking about lol
    but its good on its own its nice seeing your earlier work before i tamed you down a bit
    j/k j/k j/k j/k dont kill me !


    • Dmonik
      November 12
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      Tamed me down?
      Love, you haven't tamed me, you just learned how to hold the leash
      Glad you like it though

      'D' Scott


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    November 12

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    yip, has a way of adding to the 'I don't like xmas' appeal..
    twisted , dark, definately Dmonik in style...


    • Dmonik
      November 12
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      I don;t like christmas, but your beloved daughter wants me to get into the spirit... The only spirit I'm interested in is bourbon, rum or vodka

      'D' Scott


  • FallenEngel
    December 9, 2007
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    wow

    creepy and strange i love it

    • Dmonik
      December 9, 2007
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      Thanks very much Glad you enjoye this piece


  • jcat gold member
    December 8, 2007

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    Gave me the creeps!!! Which I am sure is the reaction you were hoping for here!!! VERY NICELY DONE!!! This was just awesome!!!!


    • Dmonik
      December 8, 2007
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      Thanks very much. That is the excat reaction I was going for
      Glad you enjoyed this piece


  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 7, 2007
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    Wowzer!

    Fantastic, awesome and pure genius. Great poem, love it!!


    • Dmonik
      December 7, 2007
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      Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. Innocence was always created to be destroyed...why even 'Fairy Tales' have murder in them....

  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 7, 2007
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    Wowzer!

    Fantastic, awesome and pure genius. Great poem, love it!!


  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    September 20, 2007

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    O.O

    I WOULD SOOO BE IN HEAVEN! Fuck, show me a scalpel or a knife and i would love my killer for eternity!!!! AND MAKE A PEACE OFFERING! Hot as fuck, kudos

    • Dmonik
      September 21, 2007
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      lol. Glad you enjoyed my interpretation of 'Away In A Manger' lol.

  • Acidanthra
    September 19, 2007
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    I like this one. It has humor, but also darkness. I think this one actually has class. LOL


    • Dmonik
      September 19, 2007
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      Class? Oh shit...I failed! lmao
      This is dark, I'm morphing carols and nursery rhymes that would be fit for my heirs, lol.

      • Acidanthra
        September 19, 2007
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        LMAO!! that is a good idea for some genealogical revenge. Never thought of that one...


  • NyteShade
    September 19, 2007
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    I thought this sounded familiar lol. Love the style.


    • Dmonik
      September 19, 2007
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      Thanks Bell....what can I say? Tis the season for masochism and murder. You know, I'm gonna use that line. Gotta rewrite 'Deck The Halls' 'Hang the whore and fuck her sideways...fa-la-la-la-la, la-la-la-laaaaa' lmao.

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