Lost within these moments with you…I’m lost
Seeking what I have forever been dreaming…You’re in front of me.
A sweetest link of perfection sent to me,
That I was so awestruck, I opened it promptly.
I shouldn’t have but I had, you awakened the senses within me.
Years of abuse and torment, my heart screamed…..no one answered.
Giving and giving, every one taking…..I was broken, shattered.
Through the presence of your ways, your smile,
Giving me will, strength, and again, breathing became worthwhile.
YOU, made me feel like I was a gift at Christmas…..Wanted
YOU took me and held me, fragile; you tended to me….as if I was priceless.
YOU made me feel again, love once lost, you rekindled it,
Your ways promising, your love overflowing, you showed me together we fit.
As a rose in a freshly trimmed vase, you caressed each petal…accepting me.
No matter the unusual imperfections of the petals….you loved me.
As the petals delicately fall, as time slips through our fingers,
You let it known that my beauty forever in your mind lingers.
You love me for me, you enjoy the uniqueness in me…it distinguishes who I am.
My mind fluctuating endlessly, between past and present…she had you
I want and need the reassurance that it is over, is it??....I’m jealous of what was
Yet you’re here with me, your breath on my skin, and your hands on my waist
Mine for the moment, will you be here, mine forever?
Passions has kept us heated, desires filling our kisses….tongues enticed
Every move of our affection becomes more and more like that of a fantasy…real life.
The sweetest Angel you ever came across you whispered, am I, really?
When I am with you, tangled in heated fury, bodies molding with passion,
Making the inner evilness of desire seek fulfillment… I become devil in disguise.
You offer me promises of love, passion, commitment….promise of life again...
And I’m so afraid of letting go, to give back completely….fear of being rejected.
After all this, as I choke back my fears demons, I love you….I want the same.
Author notes
-http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3324406 Use That is an piece of one of my most recent posts. I want you to take that; and use it as a base for your poem.
Thanks for the inspiration.
Love you Scott
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Wow Honey, this is just beautiful, every word, every nuance is exquisite. The lines flow so smoothly its amazing, you are awesome!!! I Love You...Scott
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Another wonderfully expressed piece, I really liked the imagery in this one.. Thanks for sharing as I enjoy reading your heart.. peace and poetry.. -Timothy aka poeticweaver
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So very powerful..Awesome work.Thank you for sharing it
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I can so relate to these words written I think we have a lot in common the poem is lovely with a perfect flow and tones grand imagery makes this a enjoyable read you rock sis
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My mind fluctuating endlessly, between past and present…she had you
I want and need the reassurance that it is over, is it??....I’m jealous of what was
Yet you’re here with me, your breath on my skin, and your hands on my waist
Mine for the moment, will you be here, mine forever?
Damn..this is such a beautiful write Tory..all the way, but these lines catched my eyes more than once....
I do hope this love will be there with you and last forever...you deserve to be loved like that
GOLD!!!!!!
XXJeannette
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