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manipulation is a cruel art

-I happen to love too many things
    …the wind is everchanging like my heart…

-I probably get more than I deserve
  …your lips are so much sweeter in the dark…

-Your love, sincere, has made me guilty to a point of lies
  …I’d love to think I’ll miss you when we part…

-One can only pretend and lie for so long
  …Yet I don’t love you…and there was no spark…

-I’m just as confused as the next girl
…Confusion’s taken to a point of art…


manipulation is a cruel art…

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  • Topnotchsy
    July 28
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    Nice write. I like the delivery of the piece.

  • Very Nice

    I really like this very much.
    Very well written and I really enjoyed reading it.
    Thanks.


  • Bartholomew Mole
    February 9, 2008
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    Yiggle yoggle woo woo.


  • Sean Ottoson
    September 23, 2007
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    I wish I didn't know him.


  • Deja Vu
    September 19, 2007

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    Playful, good

    Ah, manipulation... one of woman's most powerful tools. Truthfully, I prefer honesty, even if it can be brutal. There's something to be said for someone who has the balls to say what needs to be said *when* it needs to be said.

    Good words to keep in mind.


  • Broken4you
    September 19, 2007
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    Great Write..The simplicity is very beautiful.


  • ThnxsForTheMmrs-x-
    September 19, 2007

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    Very efeecetive, and creative. too true, great job, i love the ... sentance... its great, kind of like unfinished thought, very nice,..


    thanks for the share..

    kaydee


  • jusaliltrubl
    September 19, 2007
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    I'm so there

    I am living this as I read...great expression.

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