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Passion's Scent

In scent of skin
so fresh to taste;
to peel back layers
spirit bursts,
in passion's hunger
for luscious juices.

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Prompt a - Mandarin Peel

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  • individuality gold member
    April 12

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    a good poem that sets alight happiness with a laughing flame of sweet juice, let the air catch the aroma of passion.


  • DancingRed
    September 25, 2007

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    "peel back layers"- ah, the beauty and power. I love this piece. Your images bring power to your words. It seems a little sensual, delightfully delicious.
    Thank you; I really appreciate your entry.

    DancingRed.


  • anaisnais
    September 20, 2007
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    Pleasant write, lovely description.


  • pearl-dragon
    September 19, 2007

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    This was so good I could not only taste but smell from your description. Again, good luck in the contest. Do you ever run out of words?