dreaming of the light ahead
from tribulations of yesterday
giving way to a brighter light
when seeing only a darkened soul
closed forever in an open room of wonder
gazing through dreams of compassion
and tears of bewilderment
where do we journey from here,
only the angels above can tell
Author notes
PROMPT: "A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world. "
Oscar Wilde
or
the picture above
A contest entry
- PIF Early Bird Quickie...10/50/30 by poet2angels.
575 points, ended September 19, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Love this Wonderful piece. Great job sister.
Very Talented. Good luck in the contest
delila
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Wonderful entry!
Great ending!
Wonderful ude of the prompt
Lynda
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Great take on this prompt very deep and grand imagery best of luck to you
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Oh indeeed my sweet sister. This was a lovely take on the prompt. Enjoyed this read. Best of luck to you in this contest.
Tory
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A beautiful response to the prompt.
All the best with this
Gaylene
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prompt is:
"A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world. "
Oscar Wilde
or
the picture above
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