The arch sun light dawned on vacant floors,
from dreams of heaven, bound and delightfully wed,
before the indefinite pain, weeps the gaiety of sin,
seemed that the days of sunshine, went packing;
the empty closet of cobweb future, churns many tears
in the nights silence, there's havoc and rage
building stone wall defense, against the opposing gender,
darkness in sunlight, lesses this spirit, once whole,
ever changing mood, riding the waves on the sea,
longing for a kiss from the old soul mate, by the shore
Author notes
picture prompt
A contest entry
- PIF Early Bird Quickie...10/50/30 by poet2angels.
575 points, ended September 19, 2007, 9 entries
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Comments
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Beautifully done in great imagery and metaphor...
WOnderful take on the prompt!
Lynda
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love the flow and tones grand imagery makes this a great read best of luck to you
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Lots of well manipulated angst in this poem... mm
"the empty closet of cobweb future, churns many tears
in the nights silence, there's havoc and rage
building stone wall defense"
Easy to relate to, great write! -
prompt is:
"A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world. "
Oscar Wilde
or
the picture above
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