Moonlight beams and fragment dreams
brings abandonment when the foundation
is exposed in a mirage of emotions
holding on tight to wishes and promises.
Confusion is bundled ~ beclouded
and broken in the mirage of the
light of the day, another jagged
edged heart bares all for the world to see.
Author notes
prompt is:
"A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world. "
Oscar Wilde
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A contest entry
- PIF Early Bird Quickie...10/50/30 by poet2angels.
575 points, ended September 19, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thanks!
Interesting prompt. I think you did well with it. Very interesting. And congrats on your trophy!
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Wonderfully penned with such beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your well deserved trophy
Gaylene
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Great job with the prompt. Good luck in the contest.
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A piece of morning disenchantment that find its shadow looking inward...lovely entry...
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A piece of morning disenchantment that find its shadow looking inward...lovely entry...
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I love your take on the prompt!
The word usage is great...
Beautifully done...
Lynda
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prompt is:
"A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world. "
Oscar Wilde
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