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Comes The Sunshine

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It is wonder's child,

blushing color
exposing finger's quill
to quiver,

remembering half-rounded moon,
curving skin, warm,
to pillow dreamy haven;

but I am old enough to know,

shadows speak
in waves of sleep
baring image, as sensual liaison,

so scent might find in tangerine,
morning's enlightened

words of sunshine.











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  • tara wilson gold member
    September 19, 2007

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    "shadows speak
    in waves of sleep
    baring image, as sensual liaison,

    so scent might find in tangerine,
    morning's enlightened

    words of sunshine."

    Lovely poetry as always, Mr. Mountain, beautiful morning songs and imagery from your inspiration.


  • Namita
    September 19, 2007

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    Wow! This is just so very beautiful.

    "remembering half-rounded moon,
    curving skin, warm,
    to pillow dreamy haven"

    So so beautiful and unique... captivating as usual. This really caressed my heart. Good luck in Lynda's quickie...

    Namita


  • blondone
    September 19, 2007
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    Beautiful imagery and th ewords flow with ease the tones makes this a lovely read


  • poet2angels gold member
    September 19, 2007
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    Sigh~
    This awakened my senses...SO lovely is this kiss of dawn...Just beautiful!!!

    Lynda


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    September 19, 2007

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    I do believe that everything, even the elast of them, are seen through spiritual lenses with you.

    Good morning scribe


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 19, 2007

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    Another truly beautiful piece from you, as usual
    Your words always have such a spiritual feel to them.
    All the best in the contest.
    Gaylene


  • poet2angels gold member
    September 19, 2007

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    prompt is:

    "A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world. "
    Oscar Wilde

    or

    the picture above

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