Looking deeply into your sorrowful eyes
blue waves of pleasure encircle me
Capture my essence of purity
Losing myself in your garden of sin
Words don't seem to be enough
to let you really know what this means
Maybe we shouldn't be here now
releasing tension
I lost myself somewhere in between your fingers
that were caressing my exsistance
with bodies entertwined in sheets of lust
wanted so badly
but dangerously careless
Emotionally distressed by the situation
pleasured beyond measure
artistically moving as one
breathless connection of two souls
viciously stimulated
As you fall asleep tonight
anticipate our morning rapture
inconceivable pleasure
essentially indulging in the sunrise...
Author notes
"my voiced was hushed against the things we had been doing. I was losing myself in between your fingers and I'm not sure if this is what I wanted but I'm so damn sure it's what I needed."
XxLisaJazminexX
A contest entry
- && Think of me when you go to sleep. by blemished irises.
1400 points, ended September 26, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - In Search Of An AP Family by xTomorrowx.
600 points, ended October 3, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - anything goes. by warrior-eagle.
600 points, ended October 3, 2007, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For Poets With No More Then 10 Trophys Hm's Dont Count by Starz of Heaven.
525 points, ended October 18, 2007, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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dear poet i think you did a very great job on putting this lyric to visual play i was honored my essence sister to do so
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Beautiful piece darling you know I loved this one
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YAY ! I am so happy you liked it sweetheart!
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my lovely seductress wife you did a very great job here with expression as always good luck in the contest as you giving the contestants complete danger
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Oh my GOD
damn just look at your fine ass!
those pictures drive me crazy!!!
oh, yeah thanks for the comment!
I really missed you!!!
where have you been beautiful wifey!!!???
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Beautifully written
Expressing well what can happen in the heat of the moment. A pleasure to read
Love ~sugar~
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this was sautated in heat gr... you did a job on this and you should win somethin out of one of these damn contest nice job
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i love this lisa i think you did a very great job here i think you will do quite fine in the contest honey your on fire
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Beautiful
This is a wonderful poem, you have doen a great job showing how anyone can get caught up in passion or lust, not thinking of the what ifs. Excellen write, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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WOW LJ
this is deep, you should have been won sumthin on this piece for sure
I loved how your words glide across the paper. Great job
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Oooh. I like this
Its awesome.
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i like this heaps, its a really good piece of writing, im sorry to tell you that unless you place your username and which member of my family, if any, you'd like to become you won't receive an award, sorry, but its in the rules... thanks for entering though =)
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This So Erotic!
This poem is extremely erotic without the slightest hint of smut. I love reading poetry like this.
Fabulous imagery, great choice of words, wonderful metre.
Write on, Poet!
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This is very good yeah oh the emotion I can relate to this.Thank you for sharing and goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes
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thank you so much for the support and love.
Means alot!
=)
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