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Atmospherium

'tween
silence
and chaos
my heart pounds (firm)
though I tremble-- leaf
in the wind, inchoate
and excitable. I'm a
balloon-- up! Up! Where the air, thin....
lets go-- and, unbound, I -pop!- (sweet sleep)

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I think this either rocks, or sucks, but either way it's really weird. First thing I've "seriously" written in about a month.

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