Working in a dead end job so underpayed.
Just to make a buck come my way.
All for a life where loved ones stay.
Praying for the same thing everyday.
I want to be somebody not just a passerby.
With the church filled up the day I die.
Such a beautiful crow flying majesticly high.
To take my soul to my relatives waiting in the sky.
I do this all for the love I feel in her heart.
With a child in her womb, my crying starts.
As I work to keep the only car.
I hope her feelings never fall apart.
As the day comes to a close all the worrys lift.
By herside to shower her with a kiss.
And fufill her every want on her list.
Happy as can be cause she is my greatest gift.
A contest entry
- Fresh Freestyle Free Verse!! by requiempoet.
900 points, ended September 27, 2007, 12 entries
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Comments
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I'm going to take a stab at interperating this, I'm sorr if it's wrong. You work your butt off to succeed in the world, and you just want to keep the greatest gift in the world and the only thing that makes you happy is your loved one!? Oh that's really sad!!!
but as long as you have the love of your life and a child hey that's cool!! and all of the rest of the things are just bonuses!!
best of luck in my contest!
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