My Humbleness may it detect
My
Automatic Butterfly Effect
When Earth was still young
My behold it had a sun
My oh My wont this be fun?
My death effect, My solar run
When the earth was still cold
My heart it ahold
Blackened thunder
May this
a steady knock, a pile of gold
Who am I to aurtherize
My pain beat down to minimize
My oh My wont this be fun?
You be the moon and I'll be the son
Wait now, for he arose
My bath of blood, My deep dark crow's
Rip me up and then expose
a deep black hole, a dying rose
Water, fire
Black rose
and Thunder
To my surprise there he goes
The moon is out, may he impose?
When the earth was a little older
it got much more duller, and much more colder
And I be, I be the holder
of Ancient scrolls upon my shoulder
My darkest time
My two leaf clover
My dark effect
starts all
over
A contest entry
- Anything goes by crystallynnbradford.
565 points, ended September 19, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - And the winner is....Prewrites! Prewrites!! and Prewrites!!! by Daizy21.
450 points, ended September 25, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Now this is creative thank you for this! Imagery was beautiful, and I love the emotion you put into this! Well done
Thank you for entering and Good Luck!
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this is really awesome. it has great flow and rhyme
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Oh. That was great.
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Butterfly effect..!! Cool! I think it's unique. ^_^ yeah, the rhyme scheme. You managed to pull it off really well. Good luck in the contest!
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this is very interesting and the flow was really great...i thought that the rhyme shceme in it was penned down very well
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