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Tell Me

Do you really love me or is that just a line?
You act like you don't want me, no i'm not fine.
Why didn't you offer to hold me?
You know I have a broken heart.
Would you offer another start?
Knowing you can't replace the child that rips me apart.
How can you act so cold?
We've both been through a lot, this game is old.
Who else is gonna ease my pain?
If you haven't realized we have a lot to gain.
How can I be sorry for your loss?
It happened and my heart feels as though impailed to a cross.
Can I have my angel back?
No he's gone for good and its love I lack.
Did I give you my heart or just a toy?
I know you hurt but this is my little boy.
Will you ever find a heart as empty as mine?
Because sometimes I feel like loving you is a waste of my time.
Did I not leave it open for you to be there?
It just seems like you chose not to care.
Are others more important than me?
If thats true I'll let you be.
Did you know what I wanted from you?
A kind loving honest heart that can be true.
Was that a lot to ask for?
If not then you tell me why I feel so damn blue.

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  • secretprince
    September 29, 2007

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    wow you are good

    this poem you wrote is sweet i love it i had a few tears and you got me thinking what love is all about you will find what you are seeking trust in your heart sweet you will find true love

  • lostdarkness
    September 29, 2007

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    wow

    this is a very well written poem and i can fell the pain within the words. i thought that it was so good that i nominated it for the front page. hope you dont mind.

    ~kris


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 18, 2007

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    Wow,

    Though I had to highlight this to read, your words are very powerfully weaved. This is a very indepth piece, and I hope better days come your way, and thoughts. Well expressed.

    PassionsPromise