SUMMER UNDRESS
If ever I a bra should wear,
Heathcote would think that I’d gone queer
for often, though we’re quite discreet,
we’ll both go topless in the heat.
Then I confess he needs to don
and keep a pair of grundies on
‘coz, when he views my stunning tits,
he can’t control his manly bits.
And, when I wear my short grass skirt,
he cannot keep his prong inert.
Of course he sees, beneath the grass,
there’s nothing covering my arse.
My golden breasts with darker tips,
quite slender waist and rounded hips,
long legs with rather neat behind,
drive him completely out of mind.
Although I’ve twice been warned by vicars
about refusing to wear knickers,
I do not either wear a bra
though you may think me quite bizarre.
But each of us, in summer, loathes
to wear a lot of sticky clothes
and much prefer to feel the breeze
that sets our naked skins at ease.
And, as we’re married, what is wrong
if, sometimes, I allow his prong,
aroused with passion, to insert
itself beneath my short grass skirt?
If I don't let him, Heath gets huffy
and then he takes it out on Fluffy!
Hinemoa Giffen, September 19th.2007.
Author notes
Heath always acts as though he hates Fluffy, but I think he pretends to Hugh and I coz I've seen him several times patting Fluffy when he thinks we're not looking.
It's true, I do go without my Bra and Knicker's ALL THE TIME! That's why we're at it ALL the time!It get's Heath very excited knowing that I have nothing on underneath. Hugh has learned to knock loudly before he enters.
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A contest entry
- This CONTEST # 21 IS ONLY OPEN FOR HUGH WYLES FAVORITES. by huguenauties.
750 points, ended September 28, 2007, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Marriage is great. You have set it in very clever phrases, and no one could dispute your reasonable arguments. This was fun to read, well done! Best of luck to you. 
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hmmmmmf. sounds like you get more action than i do. perhaps i should try out a grass skirt lol
didnt quite expect so much detail... gladyou added it though.... however i am now off to shower
great write!
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AllPoetry porn! Cool, got my popcorn and Moxie, lets have more!
It's a different style from what I'm familiar with from you, not that I've read enough to make that determination I guess. But it's fun, a little silly, and of course just a little naughty! Hugh and Heath's eyes must be aflame after reading this!
Ok, Hugh told me never to divulge the scores in contests and yet everyone seems to know you got zero votes in the last one...now I didn't tell anyone so that leaves Hugh, lol. Tsk, tsk, tsk!
It's a very Hughesque poem, filled with all kinds of fun.
I can guarantee you'll get votes since this time I can vote...twice
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Hugh put it in his comment below.
But I'm over it now. Thems the breaks!
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Phewwwww Hine! This even has me excited and I ain't got no one here to ease my yearnings.
WOW! You and Heath are both DOW & DOM's for sure.
Yes, how did the Vicar know you had no knicker's on? That is a good question Darlene posed. and poor Fluffy, I know how much Hugh loves her.
A great poem my dear Cousin, good luck in the voting, but I don't think you'll need it!
Love Jen.
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inquiring minds want to know...
"Although I’ve twice been warned by vicars
about refusing to wear knickers"...how does the vicar know you don't wear knickers??? and poor Fluffy...Very nice poetry concerning the fun and games of going without a bra and knickers..good luck in the contest
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Well Darlene, you see we sit in the front seat at church and sometimes my AHEM dress sneaks up and the Vicar's can see there are no nicks on me!
Hine
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Wow!
This is "Hot"! You and Heathcote are "Hot"! It's no wonder you prefer to go 'au naturel'! Maybe it's the climate..if so, I'm seriously thinking about moving! Right now, I could use a fan and something cold to drink. Weeooh..what a sizzler!
Good Luck in the contest!
♥ Maureen
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Yeah Maureen, Heath is one HOT GUY let me tell you!
Come over anytime you like, we love to see you and I promise we'll behave while you're there. Hahahaha
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Oh la la! Lucky I don't live over there. We could be telling some good stories if we ever got out of our houses!!! LOL. I am pretty frisky with my honey. The only Pet he has is me hehe. Great poem Hine. This ribald stuff is great. Very best of luck in the contest.
Hugs and love,
Petratani xo
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AWWWWWW Hine, No wonder you and Heath are always at it, getting around like that! And the poor Vicar you must give him an eyeful to notice you're not wearing a bra! Great poem though.
I'm sorry you never got any votes in the last contest, maybe you'll have better luck this time.
Thankyou for entering our huguenauties group contest and good luck in the voting.
Love A/J
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This is priceless, Hinie... I think this time around you'll make up for all the votes you didn't get in the last contest.
It really is funny and I wish you good luck
Dee
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My darling,
I love that picture of you in your kakahu (cloak) - especially when I know you've got nothing on underneath it!
I did mention to Hugh that you were pretty downhearted that nobody at all voted for your poem in contest #20 and I hope you'll get lots of votes this time because I think your entry deserves it. Anyway, you can count on MY vote!!
I didn't kick Hugh's Fluffy for the reasons you mention however. As you know that damn cat always annoys me making silly eyes at Hugh and the disgusting way she lies on her back showing off her wherewithal.
Mind you, it's quite a different thing when YOU do it, my darling.
Well, I suppose I'd better try to get an entry together myself for Aunty Joan's contest.
Applause and all my love for yours. XOXOXO.
Heath.
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Dear Hine,
There is nothing wrong in what you two do in the privacy of your home. When you were married, you both vowed "TO HAVE AND TO HOLD" and the Good Book exhorts wives to submit to their husbands. I have told Heathcote off for storming over here and kicking the daylights out of poor Fluffy just because you didn't let him have his way for once.
By the way, he tells me you were very disappointed that you didn't get any votes AT ALL in the last contest #20 so I hope that you'll fare much better with this one which I reckon is a winner!!
At least it's honest and, as you know, I always knock loudly when I come round to see you and wait till you're decent before coming in!! LOL
Applause for a splendid poem and best of luck in the voting.
Love and hugs, XXX Hugh (R.)
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