Chorus
You tell me it's alright,
that there's no need to fight,
what the hell's wrong with you tonight?
Like you don't understand
stand up and be a man.
you only run away,
what's a girl to say,
to a guy like you?
What am I supposed to do?
Just let you run away?
It's not okay...
Chorus (x2)
You tell me it's alright,
that there's no need to fight,
What the hell's wrong with you tonight?
What's wrong with you tonight?
Your world's so black and white,
can't you see grey?
Hey, hey, hey...
I guess you can walk away....
Author notes
MY FIRST SONG EVER...I THINK IT SUCKZ...BUT U TELL ME! THIS IS TO ALL THE WOMEN WITH JACKASS BOYFRIENDS!
A contest entry
- AP’s Crap Poetry~ For Malabu (Doubled Points) by Malabu.
1400 points, ended October 15, 2007, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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well yeah
it may suck to you..but im sure someone out there one day may put some music to it....and sing it for you....perhaps the one you wrote it about...
thanks for entering... -
Well, lord knows we all have had some jackass boyfriends! But I have met a few guys with jackass girlfriends too, so you know a jackass for a jackass is how I see it.
Thank you for sharing your song.
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I can remember a song Walkawy....You know, when it gets music to it I think it will do o.k. I know it is on the boyfriends' whats' wrong with you, but that can be said about girlfriends some nights too....I would try and get a tune....and then it will all come together
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