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Getting Fired

Excuses found were not of work--
her happiness was the cause 
for you musn't laugh too much at work!
So unemployed she was.

Eating old cake mix for dinner,

balogna and crackers a treat.

Fighting for the wish to live

On destituted feet.



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  • drumdog79
    September 20, 2007

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    Poverty....what a drag. Been there, don't won't to go back. The first line confuses my ignorant self, maybe you could clarify it for me. But I love the last line, FANTASTIC!


    • baitsoul
      September 22, 2007
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      First line

      The reason I was fired was not work-related! Now are you unconfused?