Be Careful How You Move Me by Soulful Woman at All poetry

Be careful how you move me
I can easily turn against you
You see me in one spot but
I can change my place in an instant
with just one false move from you

I like playing games with your mind
making you second guess your plans
building anxiety within you
making your palms sweat

Go ahead, touch me…place me someplace else
Are you sure?
Did you look around and check it all out?
Remember, I warned you…….
Be careful how you move me

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Dark, Fantasy • next in list

A contest entry

PICTURE PROMPT SEMI-QUICKIE by esroddo. 600 points, ended September 20, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Mykeee
November 25, 2007

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As a chess player, I love the metaphoric verbal usage of be careful how you move me. You can be a person, place or thing and this is just playing so nicely in my mind. great addition to the group Cheers ~ Mykeee
Poetic Tasha
November 22, 2007
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great write and take on the prompt.
interesting and keeps you reading

Tasha
Poetry and I Inc
November 22, 2007

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Hmmmmm, very interesting theme and concepts going on here. Liked the back and forth of it all. Great job. Thanks for sharing.
~Mstrss"
raingoddess
November 22, 2007

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Great
This is a great write, you have done a great job here, I see why you won gold, I am not that good at promt poetry, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.

raingoddess
MahoganyFlow
November 21, 2007
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This was very unique! I really enjoyed this! Congrats on the trophy.
ennovy
November 20, 2007
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Truly deserving of the gold...written by a woman with a golden soul.......congrats.....novy
Ephiphany
November 20, 2007
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I love how you took the prompt on this picture...WICKED

ephiphany
Loveandblessings2u
November 20, 2007

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Oh My this is really very good,
your talent really showed in this piece.
Your poem fits the picture perfectly and the story told matches well.
Great job...

Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
Naridill
November 8, 2007

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Oh~! This one was a little creepy but definately you have intrigued me again. You took on this image impressingly.

Thanks for entering and much luck ~~~!
esroddo
September 20, 2007

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I really enjoyed this
Like the way you wrote it like a dare, trying to out wit the other player. very intrigueing indeed. Thank you for entering and good luck. LISA
Malabu
September 19, 2007

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Daunting
I guess I should run away...thoughts of sex are completely out of the question...what do I do...oh what should I do...lol...I could stay and ignore what she said...but then again...what will happen if I move her the wrong way...love it...haha..
Swangrnv
September 19, 2007

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sure got me hesitant!
kinda wicked with the imagery you conjure up in my mind!l.o.l.! well done, and good luck in the contest!
x-Black-Butterfly-x
September 19, 2007

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oh awsome take on the prompt it held alot of depth to it and it had that dark essence
well done hun and best of luck
ennovy
September 18, 2007

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This sound like a woman made of crystal, and her heart breaks very easy...but she has learn to deal with men. So don't move her the wrong way, she just might explode...I like this concept I visualized....excellent write......novy
HeavenScent4U
September 18, 2007

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wow this is very intense and sounds like a dangerous game indeed. you have made this game come to life. excellent take on the prompt. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
PassionsPromise
September 18, 2007

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i am moving out of this page lol amm afraid of getting my ass kicked lol. Great job here best of luck to you in this contest
tory