I don’t need to be
Taken care of
Or to be told that
I’m the best
I don’t want to be
Told your dick is so hard
And you
Can’t wait to taste me
I don’t need to be
'Complimented’ by you
Saying that you want to
Take me home
I don’t want to be
Told that you can’t wait
To see me naked
Because you can go all night
I don’t need to be
Touched by you and
Your groping hands
And your pathetic stories
I don’t want to be
Told that I’m such a GREAT FUCK
That you are afraid to
CUM near me
I don’t need to be
Listening to you and
Your arrogant moans
And your apathetic calling
I don’t want to be
In your bed
On top of you
FUCKING YOUR BRAINS OUT
Only to fade along with the smoke
From your post-fuck
Suck on your
Cigarette.
A contest entry
- Slam Poetry by live2die.
600 points, ended September 27, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give Me Your Most Offensive Poetry by Edna Sweetlove.
300 points, ended October 24, 2007, 24 entries
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565 points, ended November 5, 2007, 47 entries
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Comments
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Umm wow that was dang hate filled. Thanks for entering into the contest and good luck to you in the contest.
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This is quite nice. I liked it. I love lesbian poetry. I really do. I love lesbians in fact. They are lovely.
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Wow! How ironic I wrote a poem that ended with a ciggarette.. Well written nice imagery. I like the entire format. Very hot and sensual at times. Well worth reading. Blessed Be my friend! ~~Shannon~~
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Wow
Speechless... I really am! A very powerful and emotional write. I love the way you start every stanza with "I don't need/want", it kinda added an additional punch to this. I loved the end! A beautiful end! I can say that when I got to the the end, I truly despised that person smoking that cigarette. I love it!
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Magically written. I don't know that there is much more I'd like to say. Your grasp of words was fairly captivating; stands alone.
~Andrew
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