Love knows no difference,
Of age and parents alike.
It gives you a giddy rush,
Like when you first ride a bike.
I have felt its downs,
Many a time before.
But every time I fell,
I got up to find one more.
Each time I have fallen,
To a girl whom doesnt feel the same.
Now I have fallen again,
But this girl is a new name.
She has dark brown hair with reddish streaks,
And eyes of green and blue.
So now I confess my feelings,
To Morgan, I love you.
Dedicated to Morgan Christian.
A contest entry
- Fresh Freestyle Free Verse!! by requiempoet.
900 points, ended September 27, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a cute poem, however I might delete or change the last two lines so they flow better. But this is a good poem with a cute intent behind it.
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oooh like this one, so sweet...
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AWWWWWWWW that was so sweet !!!!!!!!! one question ... did you give her this poem because it is so sweet and not everyone can write there feelings down , so if you didn't i think you should !!! best of luck in the contest!!!
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