i told her my secrets now
i'm having regrets now
oh oh oh
she has left me on my own
left me all alone
told her i'm lonely
and she was
the only one
to understand
i told her my whole past
now she just looks and laughs
my cliche words
of pain and hurt are
nothing but a joke to her
when i see you i think
im breathing in smoke
i might as well be smoking
eighteen ciggerates
she telling my secrets
shes spilling my soul
shes stabbing my back
oh shes telling my secrets
i wish i could just
forget my whole past
i though we were friends
i gguess that was a lie
just like the one you told
about never saying a word
when i see you i think
im breathing in smoke
i might as well be smoking
ciggerates
she telling my secrets
shes spilling my soul
shes stabbing my back
Author notes
i know its got some errors in line amount and spelling but if you would be so kind as to tell me where i'd be happy to fix it if thats what youd like
A contest entry
- For Poets With 10 Or Less Trophys Only- PIF by Mercury Rising.
550 points, ended September 25, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
(sing)Option 5: Confessions / Lies
Comments
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great flow in this poem....created
lots of emotion too that we all could relate to...you
did a really good with this!
ears2hearyou
Kathleen : )) loved this poem! brutal honesty! and
morbid regret!
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I know how you feel. I have had people tell my secrets and fears to others and I've also been given their secrets and fears. It's hard to know what to do with them too. I know many peoples private business, but these days I pure blank refuse to give private information to anyone, in fear of being taken for granted, or for them telling everyone else what I think / have done. It's my right to keep things kept to myself if I want to. Maybe you should do in the future until you completely know someone for sure and know (or REALLY think) they aren't going to blab.
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A fine poem with a few spelling errors, but not to worry, this was still a pleasure to read. Best of luck, and thanks for entering.
David
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