It's just two names
Carved into a table
With a little heart
In the middle
Representing the perfect love
We may fight
And we may argue
But the symbol
will never fade
One long kiss to consecrate
It's egsistence
And how it makes me happy
Just to think about it
Even though we might go
The wronge way
Before long
We will always remember
Two names with a little heart
In the middle
Author notes
Again written for my writting class
A contest entry
- The Most Important Person to you ... by xHeartofDarknessx.
300 points, ended October 2, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love poems wanted by rosepoet.
300 points, ended September 25, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Submit a poem you would give to "The One" in your life or how you would treat them by PureRomance.
950 points, ended November 13, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gentle Love by Celticjedi.
600 points, ended December 1, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything and everything! by My Selfish Romance.
300 points, ended January 26, 2008, 97 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like this a lot! The famous heart with two names...I was waiting for that one.
Great job.
Cj
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oh This is so beautiful. It is really sweet just as previously posted. You did an awesome job with this one. I look forward to seeing more from you in future contests that I hold. This is my very first contest and the reason I chose the topic is b/c that's mainly the type of poems that I write. I'm a hopeless romantic as sad in the begining of this contest Good luck to you and your contest, and keep up the excellent work. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you for entering it into the contest.
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Awwwwwww
This poem is soooo sweet! I loved it. Makes me remember a love long since forgotten. Bravo! Excellent work.
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I Am going to leave pretty much the same comment on evrybodys Poem/Lyrics ect but tell you what i think are the best parts.
to be honest with you all it was a very hard choice to make you were all very good, i hope you enter my other contests in whitch will be comeing soon
the Part in whitch i loved the most about your Poem...
"We may fight
And we may argue
But the symbol
will never fade"
it stood to me
it cute and yeah
Thanks
Very Well Writen
Thanks Again
xBx -
Amazing poetry! good luck in the contest.
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