flashback--
decade and half,
divine symphony starts,
at lover's first sight...
innocence,
idealism of youth--
soon torn,
symphony crashes
unfinished.
Author notes
hyphenated harmony
bubbleburst
A contest entry
- Quickie Cult - Invite Yourself - Round 1 by DancingRed.
300 points, ended September 25, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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You've put so much feeling into these twenty words; your beautiful metaphor works well. I like how the whole poem appears to be a memory, looking back at adolescence, but the emotions are still so real.
Thank you; I really appreciate your entry.
DancingRed.
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