Loner’s Farewell
I live alone
Inside my head
No one to care
If I’m alive or dead
I’ve chained my feelings
Deep inside
Where a tortured soul
Quietly resides
Empty and black
But it seems to yearn
For something it lacks
But cannot discern
It’s been so long
Since I last felt emotion
But my conscience explores
This strange new notion
I pride myself in not needing
Friendship or love
But my callused heart is bleeding
On the radiant feathers of the dove
From the first day
I was drawn to her
The stinging bee
To the elegant flower
Her touch is like fire to ice
It warms me to the core
A shock to a loveless soul, begot to loneliness
It’s just a feeling that makes me sure
When I look into her eyes
I seem to forget who I am
Many bleak years of hurt
Slip through the solidest dam
You see, I’ve never really loved
But I could hold her forever
When push comes to shove
I hope in the end, we’ll be together
Everyone I know
Tries to pull us apart
BUT FUCK THEM
They would have it end before it even starts
When I’m in her arms
The world disappears
Like a spell or a charm
Everything seems clear
I cannot repay her
For the gift she’s given me
All I can give is a promise
When she set me free
Author notes
this came straight from the heart, and reflects a serious change in the way i live my life
Please tell me what you think
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i love this it is dark and painful but its really eye oprnin
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hmmm.. did davy find a girl? this is very good! i havent talked to you in a while.. actually i kinda forgot, even though that is kinda mean, i miss talking to you though! well i gues ill try and get ahild of you sometime soon!
miss ya
allie
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Great write indeed
If its true then you have truly found out what its like to be the man that knows the love of a true woman
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I really feel the emotions being passed through this poem =(
Really, this is a beautiful piece of writing...
Keep up the good work
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I cannot repay her
For the gift she’s given me
All I can give is a promise
When she set me free
She has already set you free. The day she came into your life, tearing down the wall around your heart. This is so beautiful. Your words flow freely from your heart. Much emotion can be felt throughout this piece. Thanks for the read and keep on writing -
hello my friend,
i feelyou and i hope this pain passes and you get the love you feel and dream about.
i know what it is to love deep,i also know the ups and downs.
every single poem on my site since oct 1 06
is about my journey with my lover.
when i read your poem i felt it.
take a look and you will see we share almost the same jouney.
bless you
candy
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This is almost the exact way I felt when I was with my ex-boyfriend. He was able to bring me out of my depression. I was exteremly suicidal before I went out with him. He was able to show me all the love that I never thought I deserved. I was able to save my life so many times. He was my savior in my life. The greatest thing that I had ever known at that point in my life. I see here that this is how you feel about your girlfriend. How nothing that anyone says can make you feel any different. This is a wonderful gift in life. Just make sure that you don't let her go... unless she turns abusive or you see how she isn't the one for you. Rememeber that you deserve the best. Maybe this is the one, maybe it's not. But as for now, Savor it. This is the best thing that could happen right now. Keep writing, this was very good!
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I think it is raw and emotional! I love this type of poetry, where you really don't have to think too hard, where you can just vent it all out and be straightforward!
Well written!!
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